Front Cover: I like you palette of pastel colours but can you look at the pink colour and see if you can put an outline or change the shade, so the title stands out more. - Your writing on the side when it comes to the bottom section it is a little hard to read - can you have a play around with this? - Can you centre 'The Independent Music Magazine' title?
Double Page Spread: The general layout of the magazine looks good. - Could you have a look at the columns and justify them, making sure they all neatly match up at the end of each line.
Contents: You are showing consistency through your magazine with colour scheme and typography. - It does feel like there is something missing in the section that says 'content' could you have a play around with this? - Could the Free festival guide be boxed out in another colour to stand out from the rest of the text?
Front Cover: I like you palette of pastel colours but can you look at the pink colour and see if you can put an outline or change the shade, so the title stands out more.
ReplyDelete- Your writing on the side when it comes to the bottom section it is a little hard to read - can you have a play around with this?
- Can you centre 'The Independent Music Magazine' title?
Double Page Spread: The general layout of the magazine looks good.
- Could you have a look at the columns and justify them, making sure they all neatly match up at the end of each line.
Contents: You are showing consistency through your magazine with colour scheme and typography.
- It does feel like there is something missing in the section that says 'content' could you have a play around with this?
- Could the Free festival guide be boxed out in another colour to stand out from the rest of the text?