Front Cover: I really like your masthead - it suits the style of your magazine and shows how your research has informed your planning. - Could you make your masthead bigger. - Could you adjust the date and centre it, or put it somewhere else? - Does the 'Life Changing' title refer to the artist, if so could it be put into quotes or in someway link it to the artist with a title. - Could you have a play around with the colour of the writing in the left hand corner - is it necessary? - Don't forget to add in the price.
Double Page Spread:I really like the layout. - The images used seem a repetitive. Could you include a different range of shots - think about the shots you may tend to see on a dps. -In some parts it seems like an interview and others more of an article style. Whichever one, please lay it out accordingly.
Contents: - Again your images are repetitive and it was be nice to see more variation. - Think about guiding your reader through the magazine, I like the idea of writing the number - but is this easy to navigate? - Think about the layout, it is very text heavy on one side and the layout of the images does not work current
Front Cover: I really like your masthead - it suits the style of your magazine and shows how your research has informed your planning.
ReplyDelete- Could you make your masthead bigger.
- Could you adjust the date and centre it, or put it somewhere else?
- Does the 'Life Changing' title refer to the artist, if so could it be put into quotes or in someway link it to the artist with a title.
- Could you have a play around with the colour of the writing in the left hand corner - is it necessary?
- Don't forget to add in the price.
Double Page Spread:I really like the layout.
- The images used seem a repetitive. Could you include a different range of shots - think about the shots you may tend to see on a dps.
-In some parts it seems like an interview and others more of an article style. Whichever one, please lay it out accordingly.
Contents:
- Again your images are repetitive and it was be nice to see more variation.
- Think about guiding your reader through the magazine, I like the idea of writing the number - but is this easy to navigate?
- Think about the layout, it is very text heavy on one side and the layout of the images does not work current